Recent content by ToadKing

Thank you for putting in the effort to correct minor things. It might seem tedious, but it goes a long way in keeping everything uniform and up to standards.

Make this a lowercase "g" And This a lowercase "t" And I will be satisfied.

Nope This should be this: Missing spaces for the hyphens Still not Section 3? It's these small things that, when they accumulate, result in the Criminal Code Cleanup Act. That bill shouldn't be needed, and I do not want to propose a second one to fix more shit.

Why is there a large gap here. Section 4 with no Section 3? Why is this going in Part VII Corporate Offences, when it would be better off in Part IV Dangers to the Community alongside the other violence offences. If you want this, then you would state that "This offence shall not occur where"...

CONGRESS OF THE COMMONWEALTH OF REDMONT A BILL TO Establish a New Player Loan Program The people of the Commonwealth of Redmont, through their elected Representatives in the Congress and the force of law ordained to that Congress by the people through the constitution, do hereby enact...

This needs to be formatted correctly according to the Bill & Resolution Formats It isn't.

No Part II? Fix these Duplicates Why not make the Sections (Orders, Honours, Executive Awards) "Parts", the Departments "Sections", and the award type "subsection". That would go a long way in improving this bill.

Apple would like a word with you.

Link the act is it "International Community Framework Act" or "ICF Act" Per LSA Section 10(3)(c) "(c) When a bill intends to amend an Act of Congress, a link to the Act of Congress must be present within the bill." You can solve this easily by adding this in 1. Short Title and Enactment...

There are too many individual formatting mistakes to mention in this thread. Just go through the bill very slowly and sort out the spaces.

This needs to be formatted correctly according to the Bill & Resolution Formats There is also no valid co-sponsor.

This needs to be formatted correctly according to the Bill & Resolution Formats

Why not just amend this into the JSA as a new Part?

No

CONGRESS OF THE COMMONWEALTH OF REDMONT A BILL TO AMEND THE FEDERAL RESERVE ACT TO PERMIT EXCHANGE LISTING, INDEMNIFICATION, AND FIX SECTION NUMBERING The people of the Commonwealth of Redmont, through their elected Representatives in the Congress and the force of law ordained to that...