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  1. ToadKing

    Bill: Draft Agent 47 Act

    Thank you for putting in the effort to correct minor things. It might seem tedious, but it goes a long way in keeping everything uniform and up to standards.
  2. ToadKing

    Bill: Draft Agent 47 Act

    Make this a lowercase "g" And This a lowercase "t" And I will be satisfied.
  3. ToadKing

    Bill: Draft Agent 47 Act

    Nope This should be this: Missing spaces for the hyphens Still not Section 3? It's these small things that, when they accumulate, result in the Criminal Code Cleanup Act. That bill shouldn't be needed, and I do not want to propose a second one to fix more shit.
  4. ToadKing

    Bill: Draft Agent 47 Act

    Why is there a large gap here. Section 4 with no Section 3? Why is this going in Part VII Corporate Offences, when it would be better off in Part IV Dangers to the Community alongside the other violence offences. If you want this, then you would state that "This offence shall not occur where"...
  5. ToadKing

    Bill: Draft New Player Lending Program Act

    CONGRESS OF THE COMMONWEALTH OF REDMONT A BILL TO Establish a New Player Loan Program The people of the Commonwealth of Redmont, through their elected Representatives in the Congress and the force of law ordained to that Congress by the people through the constitution, do hereby enact...
  6. ToadKing

    Bill: Draft Eviction Tax Act

    This needs to be formatted correctly according to the Bill & Resolution Formats It isn't.
  7. ToadKing

    Bill: Draft Honours and Awards Act

    No Part II? Fix these Duplicates Why not make the Sections (Orders, Honours, Executive Awards) "Parts", the Departments "Sections", and the award type "subsection". That would go a long way in improving this bill.
  8. ToadKing

    Bill: Draft One Bite of the Apple Act

    Apple would like a word with you.
  9. ToadKing

    Bill: Vote International Community Framework Act

    Link the act is it "International Community Framework Act" or "ICF Act" Per LSA Section 10(3)(c) "(c) When a bill intends to amend an Act of Congress, a link to the Act of Congress must be present within the bill." You can solve this easily by adding this in 1. Short Title and Enactment...
  10. ToadKing

    Bill: Vote International Community Framework Act

    There are too many individual formatting mistakes to mention in this thread. Just go through the bill very slowly and sort out the spaces.
  11. ToadKing

    Bill: Draft Bank Deposit Tax Reform Act

    This needs to be formatted correctly according to the Bill & Resolution Formats There is also no valid co-sponsor.
  12. ToadKing

    Bill: Vote International Community Framework Act

    This needs to be formatted correctly according to the Bill & Resolution Formats
  13. ToadKing

    Bill: Vote Certified Question Procedure Act

    Why not just amend this into the JSA as a new Part?
  14. ToadKing

    Bill: Draft Federal Reserve Exchange Listing Amendment Act

    CONGRESS OF THE COMMONWEALTH OF REDMONT A BILL TO AMEND THE FEDERAL RESERVE ACT TO PERMIT EXCHANGE LISTING, INDEMNIFICATION, AND FIX SECTION NUMBERING The people of the Commonwealth of Redmont, through their elected Representatives in the Congress and the force of law ordained to that...
  15. ToadKing

    Bill: Vote BSASA Sunset Act

    CONGRESS OF THE COMMONWEALTH OF REDMONT A BILL TO REPEAL THE BUSINESS STRUCTURING ACT SUNSET ACT The people of the Commonwealth of Redmont, through their elected Representatives in the Congress and the force of law ordained to that Congress by the people through the constitution, do...
  16. ToadKing

    Bill: Draft SOWF Closure Act

    CONGRESS OF THE COMMONWEALTH OF REDMONT A BILL TO REPEAL THE TRUE ECONOMIC REDEMPTION ACT AND CLOSE THE SOWF The people of the Commonwealth of Redmont, through their elected Representatives in the Congress and the force of law ordained to that Congress by the people through the...
  17. ToadKing

    Bill: Draft Legislative Standards Renumbering Amendment Act

    CONGRESS OF THE COMMONWEALTH OF REDMONT A BILL TO AMEND THE LEGISLATIVE STANDARDS ACT TO CLARIFY RENUMBERING The people of the Commonwealth of Redmont, through their elected Representatives in the Congress and the force of law ordained to that Congress by the people through the...
  18. ToadKing

    Bill: Draft Privacy Cleanup Act

    CONGRESS OF THE COMMONWEALTH OF REDMONT A BILL TO AMEND THE PRIVACY ACT The people of the Commonwealth of Redmont, through their elected Representatives in the Congress and the force of law ordained to that Congress by the people through the constitution, do hereby enact the following...
  19. ToadKing

    Bill: Draft Redmont Civil Code Cleanup Act

    CONGRESS OF THE COMMONWEALTH OF REDMONT A BILL TO AMEND THE REDMONT CIVIL CODE ACT The people of the Commonwealth of Redmont, through their elected Representatives in the Congress and the force of law ordained to that Congress by the people through the constitution, do hereby enact the...
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